Richard Wolkomir & Joyce Rogers Wolkomir

REACTION FROM AN AMAZON.COM CONTEST REVIEWER

Beginning with the narrator's pitch perfect storytelling "voice", I was quickly captivated and constantly lured on….I loved the author's choices of people and place names - 'Fishtown' for the village, Wil Deft for the hero. This author manages to coax poetry from every descriptive turn of phrase….

REACTION FROM A SECOND AMAZON.COM REVIEWER

It started with a terrific hook - who can resist a talking cat sent to deliver a message? It starts off strong and just continues that way.

COMMENTS FROM AMAZON.COM CUSTOMERS

… wonderful scene-painting: mundane Fishtown, the cobblestoned streets, the glow seeping through closed shutters, and above all the sinister bulk of the imperial ship blocking out the lights of the neighboring town, all spring into reality before us. Impressive work.
—Cairo, Egypt

This brilliant story snags and tickles our feelings as we try to figure out its large and small mysteries. We like this lonely kid with a decent heart, a distracted brain, just a few coins, and a battered old boat….
—Santa Fe, New Mexico

…charming well-balanced prose, unexpected and delighting imagery (his hair needed a licking, determined the cat), perfect pacing and immediate suspension of disbelief…. The character's names are easily pronounced, creating instant association, and their personas are shaped almost invisibly with an expert choice of few words. I want MORE...and I want it NOW!
—Long Beach, California

Any writer who can suck a reader into a fantasy with convincing characters and bizarre situations that seem perfectly normal has a true gift….Yet, it is the language with which the story is written that sets it apart….Move over your treasured copies of Tolkien and C. S. Lewis and make room for Wolkomir.
—Waitsfield, Vermont

The story is exciting and leaves you wanting to know what will happen next….I enjoyed the suspense of thinking the imperial constables might catch him at any minute!
—Denver, Colorado

From the very first sentence I was hooked….The characters were instantly real—how many writers can do this?—inside a single sentence. Even the cat and the dog were instantly real, the cat being a cat through and through in spite of speaking, and the dog a dog through and through.
—Albany, New York


I'm amazed at how very quickly I was drawn into Wil Deft's mysterious world… a milieu of uneasy distrust and ominous foreboding. (Ah, but the barmaid offers hope!) I was completely intrigued….
—Virginia

…a world as believable as Tolkien's. I read the first chapter last night and woke up thinking about the characters and their world. I loved what the dog says—we all know that's what dogs would say, if we could only hear them…Publish this one—the movie folks will want to do something with it.
—Albuquerque, New Mexico


Wil Deft

(Opening scene of a Fantasy Novel in the Works)

by

Richard Wolkomir

© 2010 Richard Wolkomir


“Come,” said the cat.

She licked a paw.

He did not know what to say to a cat. And so he slouched in his chair, scowling at her.

“It is time,” the cat told him.

She yawned, unpleasantly, showing tiny, pointed teeth.

He said nothing.

She was not a village cat. He knew them all, and all the dogs, and all the other village beasts, tame or wild. She had come from the forest. He knew that. She had come through the open window into his hut. And now she sat on his table, beside the apple he had been eating for supper. She looked at him with faintly malevolent blue eyes. She was a black cat, with white whiskers, this cat of the forest.

She licked a different paw.

“They summon you,” the cat said. “Come.”

“No,” he said.

Anyone looking through the window of the hut, seeing the two sitting in the lamplight, the cat and the youth, would have seen nothing peculiar, such as a conversation between a young man and an animal. No lips moved. Only minds moved.

He had never heard an animal speak like this. Since childhood, in his mind, he had heard their whisperings. And as he grew, they became louder, those whispered voices, clearer. But mostly they spoke of seeds, rich in good oils, or of sunshine on fur, making you sleepy. Some, ascending the village’s oaks, expressed joy in high-branch leaping. They spoke of such simple pleasures, and of fear, anger, hunger, satiation, contentment, desire. But this cat spoke as a person might speak, almost.

“It is time,” she said.

He felt her interest dwindle.

She had done as bade. This lanky young man meant nothing to her, with his long hay-colored hair, so needful of licking, and his ragged mustache. Her tail thrashed irritably across the table. He glimpsed her thought, of peering into the darkness under forest trees, for squeakers. A paw flashes out, snatches.

She was gone.

Out the window. Back into the forest.

“They summon you,” she had said.

Who those summoners might be, he guessed.

And he said, “No.”


After the cat left, Wil Deft sat slumped in his chair, frowning, yellow mustache curled down. Abruptly, he shuddered. He grabbed his leather jacket, where it lay on the floor, and hurried out, shaking his head as if to erase what was in it.

He found his way through Fishtown’s dark streets by slivers of lantern light shining through shutter chinks. But mostly he remembered how the cobblestones felt underfoot, worn here, broken there, and then two missing, marking where he must turn down stone steps to the wharf. There he untied his battered skiff. Long ago he had spotted it floating down the river, probably loosed by some upstream storm, and he swam out to claim it. It was all he owned, besides his hut, inherited from his fisherman foster father and washerwoman foster mother, and his ragged clothes, and two fishlines and five hooks. Sometimes, when he needed a few easy coins, he rowed the skiff out to catch mudfish to sell to the smokehouses. But he mostly used the skiff as he used it tonight, to get to Horse Skull Island.

Only starlight’s silver glimmer on the water showed him the river. But he needed little light. He could navigate with his nose. Here by the docks, the river smelled of decaying wood pilings and waterweed and the shoreline smokehouses, where fish lay drying on pole racks. But as Wil oared the skiff out into the current, the river’s aroma freshened, deep water mixing with cool night air, touched with Fishtown’s hearth-fire smoke. Here the great river ran deep, and stretched nearly a mile across. Horse Skull Island lay midway, and already he smelled ale. He rowed toward the island’s southern tip.

Beyond the island, the far shore’s black hillside seemed sprinkled with yellow stars. It was lantern light, squeezing through cracks in the shuttered windows of Breming, a village a bit larger than Fishtown. As he rowed, Wil recited to himself a rhyme every Fishtown child could chant: “Breming men dig in bogs. Breming men smell like hogs.” Breming’s men did mostly dig peat, to ship downriver to the imperial city. Wil had been to Breming just once, as a child. To travel between villages, except on imperial business, was forbidden. But other children had dared him and his friend, Kobar, to go to Breming. And so they had rowed over in the night and walked along the wharves and a little up the central street. But then they fled, because the town’s strangeness made them uneasy, although they had difficulty explaining to the others, when they returned, exactly how Breming differed much from their own Fishtown.

Wil stopped rowing, to stare.

Breming’s lights, on its southern edge, winked out. More lights darkened. Now all Breming stood black.

And then he saw why.

A dark mass floated before him. Its bulk hid Breming and the far shore. After a while, in the starlight, he made it out: a great ship. It lay silent in the water, its lanterns cloaked. Every so often, its banked oars swept, steadying the ship against the current.

High above him, on the ship’s stern, iron struck flint. Tinder flared—a man firing his pipe.

In that flash Wil saw the ship’s flag: it depicted the imperial fist, clenching a sword, pointed up. Above the sword’s tip floated a disk, glowing white. All knew that emblem: the Starstone.

And the man lighting his pipe wore the yellow cape and red jerkin—an imperial constable.

Now the tinder flickered out. Darkness returned. And in that darkness, Wil sat as if stone.

END OF OPENING SCENE


(c)Richard Wolkomir 2010

SELECTED WORKS

FICTION
Links to Richard's Published Fiction
Magazines With Richard's Published Stories
Wil Deft, a fantasy novel--Opening Scene
A novel (in progress) of epic fantasy
Riders of the Dust-Gray Steppe
Short story: a "Pleistocene western," published in "Reflections Edge" magazine
NONFICTION
Junkyard Bandicoots & Other Tales of the World’s Endangered Species
A book of stories about disappearing animals, published by John Wiley & Sons, Inc.
The Quality of Mercy
A chronicle of life and caring in a small hospital, published in "Smithsonian Magazine"
Inspirational Narrative
Nosmo (a book in preparation)
A magical corgi guides us through a catastrophe, teaching us a new way to live.